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William, dont want to sound too negative but again your blog hasnt really done much for me. Summarises your thoughts, but not really thought provoking, emotional, impactive or maybe even controversial. Some blogs, like dart's, i read and feel the power and passion, feel hes put into words views or feelings i never knew i had or couldnt articulate as well as he had.

So really, its about how you stimulate and provoke rather than just tell.....

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I have to agree with SIMA, and this is constructive criticism mate.

It's a positive blog but does't really say an awful lot, has no fresh perspective or info, nor any rallying call or defiant passion evident. It's more like a post on a thread type of viewpoint rather than a blog which will attract hits.

By all means keep writing mate, strive to make your blogs better and better, you've got thousands of bears on here will give you feedback or 'criticism' ;)

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