Bobby Hume 13,514 Posted December 10, 2016 Share Posted December 10, 2016 19 hours ago, The Godfather said: Ouch!!!!!! ....... ....... ...... Dyamn!!!!!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
delamonty 992 Posted December 10, 2016 Share Posted December 10, 2016 2 hours ago, Rangers Lady said: It is a science, you are the only one condescending, In my experience, and I have a lot, this is my job, critique needs to be emphatic, that is the one thing I’ve learned over any other, if not the advice is ignored and the same mistakes are made over and over Your sanctimonious retort and original effort help no-one except you and your own happy fucking clappy insipid ego That’s reality, now take your and shove it here Ha ha.. Took the bate lol Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rangers Lady 2,380 Posted December 10, 2016 Share Posted December 10, 2016 7 minutes ago, delamonty said: Ha ha.. Took the bate lol My bad, so obvious…. in a world where feelings are precious and intellect sparse Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
delamonty 992 Posted December 10, 2016 Share Posted December 10, 2016 6 minutes ago, Rangers Lady said: My bad, so obvious…. in a world where feelings are precious and intellect sparse It's a Rangers Forum -- expect the unexpected. Anyway, I'm sure you know your stuff Just that I thought you were a little bit hard on a guy just sharing his Rangers song. He isn't going to win any awards with it... No need to question anyone's intellect.. Everyone here is different.. All walks of life and never really share what they do -- or capable of and so on. It's the internet where people hide behind keyboards ok.. Back to the match thread and real life No hard feelings... Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForeverBlue1981 67 Posted December 11, 2016 Author Share Posted December 11, 2016 On 09/12/2016 at 1:38 AM, Heshootshescores said: Yes.. Not bad, I like the folk song approach. Maybe you should write a Xmas song, replace that same tired old shit that we hear year after year. One with a Rangers theme.. Could call it Blue Christmas! :-) Could work ha ? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
cushynumber 25,178 Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 bate? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForeverBlue1981 67 Posted December 23, 2016 Author Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 07/12/2016 at 7:39 PM, heathen fish boy said: Takes a brave man to put that as a first post,pretty good wee number too,welcome aboard sir Cheers for checking it out. Appreciate it. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miller time 4,988 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 On 09/12/2016 at 3:55 PM, Rangers Lady said: The vocal is extinct, nobody sings like that anymore, You got to sound convincing, no matter what you say it has to be delivered with Impact Stringing out words, that doesn't happen anymore, syllabic stretching is just shit, keep it staccato if your serious, a Melisima for a bird is ok but even that is outdated Virtually no Dynamics, as in variations of perceived volume, tempo and instrumentation, don't change the tempo but use eights in the verse sixteens in the chorus except this has no chorus I would take it down, practice belting out, learn about song structure, intro, short get to the point/chorus/catchy bit verse, bridge and keep it under 3 .30 nearer 3 There's a lot more but I hope it helps, it is shit though That's not constructive criticism, that's just being a cunt. You clearly know a bit so why not pm him and try and give him some advice, rather than coming across as the way you do. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForeverBlue1981 67 Posted December 24, 2016 Author Share Posted December 24, 2016 Cheers to anyone that has checked the song out. If you can continue to share it I would appreciate it. Some like it, some don't. Fair enough. Some hilarious comments on here from award winning Grammy songwriting musicians. Here was me thinking it was just a wee simple folk song about Rangers ? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rangers Lady 2,380 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 9 hours ago, Queen's_highway said: That's not constructive criticism, that's just being a cunt. You clearly know a bit so why not pm him and try and give him some advice, rather than coming across as the way you do. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack The Flipper 5,936 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 On 12/7/2016 at 7:23 PM, Junior Soprano said: That's pish Lol Say it as it is mate, talk about putting a dent in creativity! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMac 1,405 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 9 hours ago, Queen's_highway said: That's not constructive criticism, that's just being a cunt. Jeremy Paxman Loyal RSC Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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